Project Alberti!!!

[**Marina**]

Hi all, the last project I've been working!!
It was made in 3DMax 2011, Vray 2.00, photoshop, onyx tree.-
All criticisms and suggestions are very welcome!
Thanks SimonC by the example of restaurant table and chair, was one of the CGW 2nd prize Rendering Competition, which came included in the CGW "EXTERIORS TRAINING - summer edition" as well as studio PK3D vehicles. -
Marina.-

[oligophant]

Hi Marina, the lighting color its nice and the bright sky bring contrast against your building but it falls too short because your frame constrain it, give it more room, by doing that you must model the near buildings and complete the street, in other words building + context. One thing that capt my eye is the lamps over the first floor facade (blacks with up and down trail), this kind of lamps works well on a vertical elements like columns, making the light spread over their surface. Lens flares are too much,also remember to break your highlights specially on floor surfaces like pavement and asphalt. I've seen your work before so i know you can do better. Good effort.

[simonhc]

Hi Marina!
This is a very good attempt on city environment! You could work more on the materials though, as they seem quite undone... You could also bring more life to the image by adding a wider palette of light colours, some light streaks and more contrast (because in some parts we loose depth). All in all it's very good.

[**Marina**]

@ Oligophant:
Thanks, there is a detail not seen the view, some holes on the balconies, which leaves through the light, it is true that I temrinado a hurry, lacking time. Thanks for the suggestions I will try to do better.
I'm always short with the sky
@Simonc:
Thanks, your opinion is always very objective, that's great!!
It is true that I have done some work on materials, the building they asked me all white and glass, was a bit difficult for me to work contrasts.
I think I missed some details yet, any effect of moving car lights, people, I would have liked .... but I was over the time to work!
I'll keep trying.

[RolandB]

Marina
As Simonhc i agree with the work on the materials, and having more contrast (a bit) on the images.
But it's really a good work which I could fully satisfy me !
I love all the small details in the interiors, you worked a lot for a little project I find !
Congratulations !
Roland

[**Marina**]

Roland thank you very much for your words, you are very kind. It was a hard working weekend. -
I have requested a modification of the project, and take the chance to make some corrections that I had suggested. -