Need Feedback

[ytsejam]

Hello everyone
I'm render this with vRay on maya. And i need your feedback because for me this is a real good render. Why for me, because i'm run on last 10 years to render with mental ray and your gap and not better integration inside Maya.
So, what do you think about this render? It's with not Post production.
THanks

Dario



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[Dollmaker]

Good work.. All though.. I think Uppar part is over exposed... You also need to add sky + contrast.. Reflections on windows need to be fixed...

[ytsejam]

Thanks Dollmaker. For reflection on window you talking about the background wall without never? I fix the sky contrast and over exposed.

[Dollmaker]

Uppar part of building have no reflections on windows.. So you may need some reflections there..

[simonhc]

Agree with exposure issue. I would also change or remove the deck lounge chairs. They look very uncomfortable

[bella9091]

Ok i tweaked here and there and got this result, i can finally see the shadows and i see it looking much better. Now for some materials